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Re: Happy Friendship
Hello classicdreams! Your poetry has a deep emotion and value hidden inside, it was a Lovely subject for a poem. The way it went on was amazing and I had ...
Aug 5, 2019 -
Re: After it's over
Hiii Brookelo! Your piece of work is really nice. The sentences and the words used are very deep. It is one of those masterpiece, which you can feel while reading. ...
Aug 3, 2019 -
Re: Good and Evil
Hiiii Ani! I really liked the poem. The values and feelings you have expressed through this, are amazing. It is beautifully put together and I loved the way it went ...
Aug 1, 2019 -
Re: Puppet
Hiiii Daria! Welcome to YWS. Your poem is beautiful. It is truly relating. The ending is painful. The way you have put it is very nice. It's really beautiful. The ...
Jul 28, 2019 -
Re: how to lose a life
Hiii Erilea! I don't have suitable words to express how much I liked it. You have depicted the struggles and compromises, which almost every girl makes. It shows how she ...
Jul 22, 2019 -
Re: The One Who Must Not Be Named
THIS IS TOTALLY AWESOME!! It's brilliant how you wrote the relation between Harry and Voldemort. You have gone very deep in the story and it's really great. This is the ...
Jul 21, 2019 -
Re: ruiner
Hello erilea! You have written a touching poem with very deep and intense meaning. Every sentence reflects enormous feelings. It gives out a very powerful and strong message "all that ...
Jul 18, 2019 -
Re: To My Dear Teacher
Hey OmMolly, welcome to YWS. You wrote a beautiful poem on teachers, pointing out their indispensible roles in our life. The rhyme scheme is nice and the words used are ...
Jul 17, 2019 -
Re: Stains
Hii Salia! I really love to read your poems. They are totally amazing. One can feel the pain you expressed, while reading. This creation of yours gives a huge meaning ...
Jul 15, 2019 -
Re: Setting
Hey, I love to read books and I thank you for writing this poem. The title was so catchy and attractive, which invited me to read it. The poem is ...
Jul 15, 2019
